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i hope you don't mind if i put in a little constructive criticism...
well, i LOVE the story, very unique and funny, BUT the art could use a bit of work. you should try to keep proportions consistent, because i noticed on some earlier pages that the size of the heads wasn't consistent, or little things like the size of one of their noses made them look like a different character. i would suggest making character models and keeping the body a certain number of heads tall to keep things consistent. these are little things, but i hope they help!

keep it up!
~David

posted by Sheargenius on August 22nd, 2011, 11:13 am





 
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I noticed an Drawing mistake, In the 3rd panel, The Protagonist's right arm goes down, Yet his hand is holding the strap.

Well Anyways, Nice Work! Keep it up. =D

posted by Shadow Raikou on August 23rd, 2011, 4:15 am



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